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From: Rose Malmaison
Date: 12/29/2011		 Fantastic story. Had me crying over Ray. He seemed so doomed from the start.
From: Shaynie
Date: 07/31/2011		 Enjoyed this story tremendously, from harrowing opening to happy conclusion.
From: Saeward (Saeward8@aol.com)
Date: 01/18/2005		 I really liked the plot. It was serious but not overly angsty.

Getting a Beta reader would be a good idea--you do really well with typos and spelling and stuff like that but your Ray has an awful lot of British-isms running through his head (such as the "lift" in his apartment building and Stella wearing "pyjamas").
From: BEVERLY (AUNTBEY@HOTMAIL.COM)
Date: 01/17/2005		 LOVED IT!
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