From: Marcella Polman (marcellapolman@hotmail.com)
Date: 06/21/2005 |
I'm slightly ambivalent about this one. The wording of your Ray POV is great, very funny. Then things turned out to have a dark side. Which, to me, wasn't solved quite satisfactory. But then, when I read stuff in DSA I always make sure to exclude h/c, violence, nc, death story, etc. I'm just a very sensitive girl.
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From: springwoof
Date: 05/22/2005 |
Very nice. I like the nervousness and pain, and the overcoming of both.
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