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From: Nancy
Date: 08/20/2010		 I'm a little disappointed in the way that you've portrayed Ray Vecchio.

I think he's sensitive enough to tell Benny right away that he is in love with a woman, and later to tell him that he is marrying that woman. so Ma Vecchio wouldn't need to tell Benny anything.

Even if he and Benny are no longer lovers, Ray would NEVER stop adoring him, and he's a caring enough friend that he would be frank with him about changes in his life. Plus, I think that he would never again want to leave Benny as he did when he took the job in Las Vegas; Ray knew he couldn't exactly explain to Benny on the phone about what was going on, and that obviously hurt Ray deeply. Ray will still want Benny in his life as a friend - remember that he still seemed to be friends with his ex-wife Angie and she seems to still care about him - so he will do everything possible to not cause Benny pain.
From: Claudia (kanetsidohi@hotmail.com)
Date: 06/28/2006		 I usually don't like stories in which Ray doesn't appear, but I like him suffering for Ray. I hope you write more about RayV. Very good story.
From: sylvia
Date: 06/26/2006		 I like this story...but poor Fraser!
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