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Comments on Return to Snow Valley

Number of comments: 8

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From: Rose
Date: 02/02/2012
I laughed so much at this: Grade one, Billy Talent stole my black crayon and stomped on it. And you let me borrow yours, remember?"

Loved the story!

From: Vicki
Date: 02/12/2011
Oh wow so heartfelt and the journey of this story is just so wonderful. Please tell me there is a follow up to this. I'd love to see how Mandy grows and how the boys are.

Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing it with us.

From: slashslut
Date: 01/26/2007
*squee* fluffy and sweet!
From: Sonya
Date: 01/21/2007
Hi

I really enjoyed this story, I always enjoy AU stories, and this was excellent. It was great to follow them from their re-meeting many years later up until their married life, and loved Mandy.

Again great story look forward to your next.

Sonya
From: primrose
Date: 01/21/2007
Yay, this is great! I think it might have been my prompt, so even better. :) Very Harlequen-y without being over the top. I like it. *g*
From: Eledhwenlin
Date: 01/21/2007
This is awesome. I found the scene, where Mandy tells Ray that she knew Stella was leaving, heart-breaking. And yay for stray freelance writers! ;)
From: sam
Date: 01/21/2007
Oh my ... this is beautiful! Their love ... awwww ... Great job! Thank you!
From: the_antichris
Date: 01/21/2007
Oh, I loved this! Ray's relationship with his daughter, the AU set-up, everything! And the PUPPIES. Perfect, perfect Harlequin.
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