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From: gloriana
Date: 10/31/2008 |
Led here by Omphale's recent rec on ds_recsredux:
Oh, this is *so* good!! If this wretched comment box wasn't on a different webpage from the original story, I would bore you by quoting large chunks of your own story back to you, but suffice it to say that you had me giggling insanely throughout. And that little touch of pathos with Fraser describing his childhood was just the drop of ink that makes the rest of the page seem even whiter. The moron in 2B, Ray's perfectly justified annoyance with Fraser's inability to think twice about courses of action that lead to instant death, Ray's eptitude with a garbage pan lid and the breaking of the landspeed record...you had every little detail down perfectly. What a gem of a story.
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From: gloriana
Date: 10/31/2008 |
Led here by Omphale's recent rec on ds_recsredux:
Oh, this is *so* good!! If this wretched comment box wasn't on a different webpage from the original story, I would bore you by quoting large chunks of your own story back to you, but suffice it to say that you had me giggling insanely throughout. And that little touch of pathos with Fraser describing his childhood was just the drop of ink that makes the rest of the page seem even whiter. The moron in 2B, Ray's perfectly justified annoyance with Fraser's inability to think twice about courses of action that lead to instant death, Ray's eptitude with a garbage pan lid and the breaking of the landspeed record...you had every little detail down perfectly. What a gem of a story.
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From: The Lonely Huntress
Date: 09/01/2007 |
This is sooo funny. Great work.!
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From: jc tryon
Date: 07/06/2007 |
You are Nuts!! Said in the kindest voice. This little piece had me ROTF the whole time. It's so wacky that it really fits DS to a T.
Keep writing, please!
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