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Comments on Lily

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From: Gloriana
Date: 08/19/2008
Some fun dialogue here, especially the voice you had for Fraser (some of which rang very true!) - and especially this line from Ray:

"So, how was sleeping with him anyway?"

Very cute :)
From: Devyn
Date: 08/15/2008
Sweet! Matchmaking babies! Liked how Fraser just showed up to help. Could see the great smile Ray had on his face when he discovered his undercover assignment. Nice!
From: Devyn
Date: 08/15/2008
Sweet! Matchmaking babies! Liked how Fraser just showed up to help. Could see the great smile Ray had on his face when he discovered his undercover assignment. Nice!

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