|From: Marcella Polman (firstname.lastname@example.org)|
Tremendous story. Sweet and horny. I'm glad I found it when I was searching for H/C stories (which I have yet to lean to appreaciate). I do not get the labels though. Drama? Okay. First times? Certainly. Romance? Of course. But AU? And H/C? I'm not sure.
But I don't mind. I liked the story very much. To me, your Ray was very much in character.