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From: Nancy
Date: 10/28/2010
Okay - I'm confused about the beginning of this story.

At the end of "Model Murderer," Fraser rejects RayV not only as a lover after RayV says that he's in love with him - Fraser is too obsessively in love with "poor little RayK" (gag!) to even consider the feelings of his best friend. Fraser also seems to reject RayV as his friend, even though I couldn't find anything in "Model Murderer" that RayV did to deserve Fraser's rejection.

Now, at the beginning of this story, things seem to be all right with Fraser and RayV and they're friends again?! It doesn't make sense. Where is the scene that fills in what happened between this story and the last one - Fraser quietly having a heartfelt talk with RayV and telling him that, yes, he is very much in love with RayK, but that doesn't mean that he still doesn't love RayV very much as a friend, and trying to soothe RayV's broken heart? It probably hurt RayV very much to have the man that he was in love with choose his replacement over him.

I just hope that no more of the F/K stories with "poor little victimized RayK" and "bad RayV who is so mean to poor little RayK" and "Fraser who is overly obsessed with RayK that he doesn't consider the feelings of others who love him" stories are being written. They simply add nothing good to the fandom.

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