From: Marcella Polman (marcellapolman@hotmail.com)
Date: 02/13/2005 |
I like this. A lot. There has been so much talk about Ray kicking down the walls of Fraser's defences. You showed me how this could be done, in a great way. I was a little disappointed that Fraser's control was back before, um, completion, but then again, that's only logic. It takes more than once take for Fraser to really let go. Great story.
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