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From: Walter
Date: 11/03/2015		 That was gorgeous! You do the imagery so well!!!
From: ride_4ever
Date: 01/10/2013		 Here on a rec from mergatrude, doing crack_van. This is so very lovely and solid-feeling and makes me feel warm all over. And I so <3 Ray learning to swim, being competent!Ray...and I so <3 the boys loving each other.

Especially brill is your imagery tying in the swimming imagery and the kissing imagery.
From: mergatrude
Date: 02/26/2007		 Hi! I'm sure I commented when you first posted this wonderful story, but I saw it today on a recs page and knew I had to read it again. Just so lovely, calm (jittery underneath), warm and heartwarming, with a wonderfully perfect ending.
From: Blue Champagne (bluecham@tds.net)
Date: 03/12/2005		 Real nice. No serious trauma, just maybe a little minor insecurity and chlorine up the nose--and Ray learns to swim like a regular person. For the rest...well, not even any chlorine up the nose. Also real simple.

B.C. :)
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