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Comments on Two Solitudes

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From: Shaynie
Date: 07/22/2011		 Gorgeous, gorgeous writing! Spot-on, the characterizations of RayK and Benton. The depiction of their separatenesses made me ache, and the depiction of their connecting made mw shiver and sweat. Yum!
From: Vicki
Date: 07/20/2011		 Gosh this was such a heartfelt story. Ray was so strong in this story i just loved him. And DAM it was HOT.

More, we need more. Did i say yup we need MORE of this story.
From: Vicki
Date: 10/20/2007		 How beautiful and sweet. You did a great job.
From: Nadine
Date: 10/14/2007		 Yummm. Beautiful. The pace and flow were excellent, Fraser's malaise, the scene with Mitch, all of it was just delightful.
From: MonicaPDX
Date: 10/08/2007		 Oh, man. I'm with Fraser on the heat; I could *feel* it. Excellent on bringing out how he felt. And you managed not to let him deflect on a lecture on failing to thrive or something, too! [g] (Plus I'm having a vision of him just sinking into a touch, now, which is going to be quite distracting for some time.)
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