Just what do you have against Ray Vecchio? It's bad enough that stupid F/K shippers have said that Ray "broke Fraser's heart" in canon by going undercover, but you had to make him the one who rejected Kowalski too? Get over your Ray Vecchio hate! He is wonderful and does not deserve to be written as you have because you love that twerp Kowalski more than him. You should have called RayV a different name in this story, because he is not the RayV I adore from canon. He would not treat anyone that way!