From: abby
Date: 08/09/2010 |
Oh man, you can't just end it like that! Where's the smut? - I loved it, by the way.
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From: Archie
Date: 02/17/2007 |
It svcked; seriously.
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From: Devon
Date: 10/25/2006 |
That was really good, concidering I'm a House/Wilson shipper! I thought that was sweet the way he gave into her and it all came together! Good job!
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From: dsa
Date: 04/22/2006 |
wow =) nice hehe
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From: Kaine
Date: 02/14/2005 |
The main problem with this fic is that, halfway through, you switch tenses and POV without any warning or apparent reason.
Other than that, it's okay.
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