From: Catrina
Date: 07/23/2007 |
Hmm...this was hard work. Show don't tell is the usual advice for writers, and it would really have helped me out here. Some dialogue among the long paragraphs of prose would have really given this story some energy. I enjoyed reading it, but it could have been easier.
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From: mysteriousm17
Date: 05/15/2005 |
Beautifully sad. Bittersweet. Almost like poetry.
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From: Paging_Dr_House
Date: 05/15/2005 |
WOW! That was AMAZING. I LOVED this one. Truly LOVE it. I have read SOO many and written so many, but this was just.... amazing. Powerful, painfully truthful. It was taking a step into House's mind, then later Wilson's.
Great Job! and thank you for this wonderful story.
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