From: catseatbugs
Date: 01/21/2007 |
This is--intriguing. Gorgeously written without being showy, and one of those rare fanfiction pieces that actually makes you stop and think about what’s being said. It’s not exactly clear what happened in some parts, but it seems to me that you did that intentionally, aiming more for an overall impression? Enjoyed it!
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From: outright thief
Date: 12/14/2006 |
Ray -- I find your comment interesting, but don't entirely know what you mean. Would you care to elaborate?
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From: Ray
Date: 12/14/2006 |
It sounds interesting, but i can't read it like that. sorry.
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