From: Catrina Marlow
Date: 09/15/2007 |
This is wonderfully well written. You have the three of them perfectly observed. Bad Tritter! Bad!
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From: Green Penguin
Date: 01/07/2007 |
wow! great little start and i think you've got these three guys written down just right. its a bad situation, the whole tritter mess, but i think their reactions were right for the situation.
keep it up--can't wait to see the next part.
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