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Comments on A Smaller World

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From: anna
Date: 11/09/2008
This was amazing. It was very...normal but you wrote it in such a way that was like...wow. It was good. Gave me that happy feeling in my stomach.
From: Cheryl
Date: 03/14/2008
This is very good--in the way it's written, the way it's paced and the way you capture the two men's personalities. Your dialogue is also very spot-on. There's a sense of tension in it--and I wasn't certain exactly how things were going to end...and I love the way they did. Keep writing!
From: ezcheeze
Date: 03/17/2007
Very, very nice!
From: treasurehunt
Date: 02/28/2007
I loved this story.
From: deviousli
Date: 02/09/2007
This was a fic of ordinary events, and nothing spectacular by the show's standards happened, but I gotta say I was holding my breath by the end of it. It takes a special skill to create a sense of urgency and suspense out of a barbeque party and a trip to Philly, and you've got it. It was even slightly claustrophobic. That image about them still not touching for comfort or question was just telling. By the time Wilson realized that this was That Hotel, I was terrified for their little waltz on eggshells. Thanks for an excellent, poignant read; it was a beautiful character study of Wilson and, indirectly, House. I loved it.
From: Lucy
Date: 02/07/2007
Absolutely amazing - you consistently write some of the best H/W fic in the fandom.
From: Ray
Date: 02/02/2007
Perfect, the quintessential House/Wilson fanfiction. Just the right amount of sexual detail, too - I'm more into passion than porn. You should write many many more like this.
From: Anick
Date: 02/02/2007
Woooooooooowwww! Love it!
From: Anick
Date: 02/02/2007
Woooooooooowwww!

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