From: Cyric
Date: 11/11/2010 |
Wow the ending of that was FANTASTIC!!!!! I can actually see that happening XDDDD
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From: Cass
Date: 03/24/2008 |
Loved it! It was perfect in it own little way, specially the last part. Looking for a other things you wrote..maybe a sequel?
Made my day (specially with the storm outside)
Cass
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From: Rick Flair
Date: 01/27/2008 |
This is a pretty well told epic metaphor relating to Ulysses. I particularly enjoyed the reference of Chase's asshole being used as the cyclopse's eye. Krycek, Mulder and Chase share the role of Ulysses and his men as they are tempted by the sirens of each other's paranoia and UFO watching and man juice and additionally that at several points in the story they become pigs. Well, of course they are pigs. They have a lot of sausage. Just like Ulysses, the men "eat" each other.
I would rank this among authors such as Herman Melville, J.R.R. Tolkien, Dante, Charles Dickens and perhaps Judy Blume. There was enough mystery in it to be considered a cryptic classic written by Agatha Christie, yet it blends genres by exciting us all with the horror elements of H.P. Lovecraft and Stephen King.
Did you have a musical score in mind when writing this masterpiece? I heard tones of Pachabel's Canon in D, Richard Wagner's Ride of the Valkyries, Gustav Holst's The Planets' Suite, Vivaldi's Four Seasons and Snoop Dogg's Drop It Like It's Hot.
Another suggestion, if this were to be made into a movie, would be to include the song War Pigs by Black Sabbath. Use of the Cake version of the song is possible if coupled with the image of cocks in mouths when the trumpet is playing.
Furthermore the use of dramatic lighting shifts would be most effective if done with strobe lights at key moments such as Chase doing anything involving his wriggling or writhing. I really see that as a powerful image or metaphor for man's insatiable desire to have House and the X-Files combined in rape.
Thank you for making so many dreams come true. It is as though a rainbow is shining through the clouds on an otherwise dreary fanfiction site. I have looked for so long for X-Files and House combination erotica and you have delivered what may be described as, in future times, the pioneering holy grail of this genre.
You are a genius. A goddamned, bona fide genius. May Allah grant you a thousand blessings on your house. Yours in Christ,
Rick Flair
Amen
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From: Rick Flair
Date: 01/27/2008 |
This is a pretty well told epic metaphor relating to Ulysses. I particularly enjoyed the reference of Chase's asshole being used as the cyclopse's eye. Krycek, Mulder and Chase share the role of Ulysses and his men as they are tempted by the sirens of each other's paranoia and UFO watching and man juice and additionally that at several points in the story they become pigs. Well, of course they are pigs. They have a lot of sausage. Just like Ulysses, the men "eat" each other.
I would rank this among authors such as Herman Melville, J.R.R. Tolkien, Dante, Charles Dickens and perhaps Judy Blume. There was enough mystery in it to be considered a cryptic classic written by Agatha Christie, yet it blends genres by exciting us all with the horror elements of H.P. Lovecraft and Stephen King.
Did you have a musical score in mind when writing this masterpiece? I heard tones of Pachabel's Canon in D, Richard Wagner's Ride of the Valkyries, Gustav Holst's The Planets' Suite, Vivaldi's Four Seasons and Snoop Dogg's Drop It Like It's Hot.
Another suggestion, if this were to be made into a movie, would be to include the song War Pigs by Black Sabbath. Use of the Cake version of the song is possible if coupled with the image of cocks in mouths when the trumpet is playing.
Furthermore the use of dramatic lighting shifts would be most effective if done with strobe lights at key moments such as Chase doing anything involving his wriggling or writhing. I really see that as a powerful image or metaphor for man's insatiable desire to have House and the X-Files combined in rape.
Thank you for making so many dreams come true. It is as though a rainbow is shining through the clouds on an otherwise dreary fanfiction site. I have looked for so long for X-Files and House combination erotica and you have delivered what may be described as, in future times, the pioneering holy grail of this genre.
You are a genius. A goddamned, bona fide genius. May Allah grant you a thousand blessings on your house. Yours in Christ,
Rick Flair
Amen
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From: Rick Flair
Date: 01/27/2008 |
This is a pretty well told epic metaphor relating to Ulysses. I particularly enjoyed the reference of Chase's asshole being used as the cyclopse's eye. Krycek, Mulder and Chase share the role of Ulysses and his men as they are tempted by the sirens of each other's paranoia and UFO watching and man juice and additionally that at several points in the story they become pigs. Well, of course they are pigs. They have a lot of sausage. Just like Ulysses, the men "eat" each other.
I would rank this among authors such as Herman Melville, J.R.R. Tolkien, Dante, Charles Dickens and perhaps Judy Blume. There was enough mystery in it to be considered a cryptic classic written by Agatha Christie, yet it blends genres by exciting us all with the horror elements of H.P. Lovecraft and Stephen King.
Did you have a musical score in mind when writing this masterpiece? I heard tones of Pachabel's Canon in D, Richard Wagner's Ride of the Valkyries, Gustav Holst's The Planets' Suite, Vivaldi's Four Seasons and Snoop Dogg's Drop It Like It's Hot.
Another suggestion, if this were to be made into a movie, would be to include the song War Pigs by Black Sabbath. Use of the Cake version of the song is possible if coupled with the image of cocks in mouths when the trumpet is playing.
Furthermore the use of dramatic lighting shifts would be most effective if done with strobe lights at key moments such as Chase doing anything involving his wriggling or writhing. I really see that as a powerful image or metaphor for man's insatiable desire to have House and the X-Files combined in rape.
Thank you for making so many dreams come true. It is as though a rainbow is shining through the clouds on an otherwise dreary fanfiction site. I have looked for so long for X-Files and House combination erotica and you have delivered what may be described as, in future times, the pioneering holy grail of this genre.
You are a genius. A goddamned, bona fide genius. May Allah grant you a thousand blessings on your house. Yours in Christ,
Rick Flair
Amen
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From: Jenn
Date: 01/08/2008 |
How funny. I loved it!
Jenn
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From: maara
Date: 09/06/2007 |
HA! Loved the ending. Very cute, and hot at the same time.
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