From: abby
Date: 08/13/2010 |
Jeeeesus this was hot. But it was kind of bad that you switched tense in the middle of it all.
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From: sidra
Date: 10/01/2008 |
Please continue this marvelous fic! It was extremely hot! Also you should definitely post this on house cameron livejournal community!
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From: Jen
Date: 04/17/2008 |
that definitely started out as a very hot story, and i LOVE the idea of house being angry ... but a some more commas and full stops towards the end would have been nice. it's kinda stopping the flow when you have to go back within a sentence to get where it ends and the next one starts. apart from that - very sexy!
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