From: Steve
Date: 03/16/2009 |
This is great writing, I really related to it.
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From: lookfar
Date: 12/19/2006 |
A great idea and metaphor. I like "until his shakes turn into shivers," and the alternate scenarios that he imagines with Julie. This could be a chapter from a longer story.
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From: wanderingwidget
Date: 10/10/2005 |
Dark, disturbing, and completely believable. All of that repression has to go somewhere. I like it.
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From: Violet
Date: 06/19/2005 |
Wow. Very powerful.
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From: amaya
Date: 04/17/2005 |
I love this. wow. it's really hard to make a coherent phrase of words even resmbling a sentence right now. so so so good. I loved your wilson. wow. that's all you're gonna get from me right now so, wow. thanks for writing and posting this.
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