From: Mrs Virgule
Date: 07/28/2007 |
Nice long story, well-written (well, the young doctor thing got a bit on my nerves too), and quite believable. Only, that wallet that Wilson gets to pay for the Chinese take-out, I guess that's not the same one that was stolen by the carjacker and burned in the crash?
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From: RoseWill
Date: 05/01/2006 |
Great story. I was nervous about the car accident at first, but Wilson's ongoing symptoms were handled really well. And it was very interesting to read about House's reactions to it. It was great to read, but I think you need just to use 'House' and 'Wilson' about three times as often as you do now. And Wilson isn't young, younger than House certainly, but not young. But the actual interactions between them were great. And the last few chapters, Wilson trying to remember and the final get together made me very happy.
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From: RoseWill
Date: 05/01/2006 |
Great story. I was nervous about the car accident at first, but Wilson's ongoing symptoms were handled really well. And it was very interesting to read about House's reactions to it. It was great to read, but I think you need just to use 'House' and 'Wilson' about three times as often as you do now. And Wilson isn't young, younger than House certainly, but not young. But the actual interactions between them were great. And the last few chapters, Wilson trying to remember and the final get together made me very happy.
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From: RoseWill
Date: 05/01/2006 |
Great story. I was nervous about the car accident at first, but Wilson's ongoing symptoms were handled really well. And it was very interesting to read about House's reactions to it. It was great to read, but I think you need just to use 'House' and 'Wilson' about three times as often as you do now. And Wilson isn't young, younger than House certainly, but not young. But the actual interactions between them were great. And the last few chapters, Wilson trying to remember and the final get together made me very happy.
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From: RoseWill
Date: 05/01/2006 |
Great story. I was nervous about the car accident at first, but Wilson's ongoing symptoms were handled really well. And it was very interesting to read about House's reactions to it. It was great to read, but I think you need just to use 'House' and 'Wilson' about three times as often as you do now. And Wilson isn't young, younger than House certainly, but not young. But the actual interactions between them were great. And the last few chapters, Wilson trying to remember and the final get together made me very happy.
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From: moothril
Date: 01/12/2006 |
Wow, amazing story. I loved it! :D I'm glad you put the warning about it *not* being a death-fic, because I really thought you had killed Wilson...but only for a few seconds. I like how you kept the snark in between House and Wilson, keeping the characterizations even after a...heh, near death experience. Both were quite believable. Great job!
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From: Belladonna
Date: 01/12/2006 |
I love this-I've read it over and over already..
Great job!
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From: moribundlust
Date: 01/11/2006 |
I loved it. Tease.
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From: Belladonna
Date: 01/09/2006 |
Lovely- I absolutely loved the angst and it was so believable how they slowly slide together
Wonderful
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From: Neena
Date: 01/08/2006 |
Fantastic story! I stayed up way past my bedtime reading it, and if I'm sleepy at work tomorrow it's all your fault :). I just love your House/Wilson dialogue, and holy poot! that was the sweetest first kiss ever! Thanks for the wonderful story!
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From: joss59
Date: 01/08/2006 |
Hello, I see your on here also! This story was just as great the second time around, perhaps even better!
Oh by the way, i went loooking for some of your stories; i read both versions of 'Pink Elephants' and i loved them!
I can't wait to read more of ypur incredibly addictive literature in future :)
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