From: Tori
Date: 07/11/2009 |
Nice! I like how you keep us guessing as to who's who. It leaves the reader with a lot of speculation, which is great. Your writing was engaging and interesting. I like the repeated use of the phrase "again and again and again". Keep up the good work!
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From: Kym
Date: 04/27/2007 |
WHOA.
* headdesk *
I've only got...intense. Amazing.
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From: anon
Date: 04/11/2007 |
hey- great theme, great story
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From: Ny
Date: 01/18/2007 |
This was very cool, a very neat approach. And there's absolutely nothing wrong with writing vigs. House, of all fandoms, lends itself to this kind of character exploration. You did it well. As I said, a very neat approach to an interesting sort of love triangle.
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From: misco
Date: 05/17/2006 |
LOVED!
I think vague, angsty, BYO interpretation fics are wonderful.
And I loved the repetition whicj I though I was going to hate but you used the device so effectively.
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From: k
Date: 05/17/2006 |
hmm this is well written but the vagueness of pov doesnt work. is this House thinking or who is it? if its house i dont get the need for the homosexaulity.
vingettes while good to read as they are really have no place in the house fandom and if you only intend to write vignettes then you really don't have any place in the fandom either.
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From: Val
Date: 04/20/2006 |
Hot. Nicely structured, too!
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