From: Ivy
Date: 03/12/2006 |
This was a facinating take on Ben. And the switching between present and past worked well for this story. I really liked it. I'm wondering though, is there any chance of a sequel where we find out what happens when Ben wakes up?
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From: Marcella Polman (marcellapolman@hotmail.com)
Date: 02/10/2005 |
Very good. Structure as well as content. Very in character and just angsty enough to my liking.
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From: lynnmonster (lynnmonster@lycos.com)
Date: 01/28/2005 |
Wow, really interesting take. It's not quite Bad!Ben, but it flirts intriguingly with that whole idea.
And hot. Did I mention hot?
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