From: slashslut (pwfan626@aol.com)
Date: 02/22/2006 |
sookie, sookie nah! that was hot. and sweet. and sappy. all my favorite things:)
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From: gazebo
Date: 04/20/2005 |
This is an excellent read! The interactions between Fraser and Ray are very real and heartfelt. The sex is, well, the sex is totally hot fantasy of what sex is suppose to be like! The ending was joyous and make me very happy. This is a story that I'll always treasure.
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From: inbetween
Date: 04/19/2005 |
*content sigh* I could see them talking like this. And I was so glad not to have stopped at the sex bit (as lots of slash has taught me to do) as you kept them in character and enriched the physical descriptions so much with ongoing thoughts and emotions being expressed :)
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From: Kijikun (kijikun@gmail.com)
Date: 04/15/2005 |
Great story! Loved the interplay between Ben and Ray. You've captured their voices wonderfully.
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