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From: Retro (retrofit@slashcity.net)
Date: 10/12/2005 |
too, too funny. Absurdist, but subtly so. Almost reads like a real episode plays. Hurrah.
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From: Marcella Polman (marcellapolman@hotmail.com)
Date: 10/09/2005 |
I'm very much a slash fan. I'm addicted to RayK/Fraser. And I totally agree with Jean. This is a hell of a funny fic. I especially like what you did with the povs. Usually, I find that I prefer stories to have just a single pov. Or, if there are multiple povs, I like them to be well-structured (otherwise I get distracted from the storyline). The povs in your story are tumbling over one another. And it works marvelously.
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From: Jean
Date: 10/07/2005 |
Not much of a slash fan, but this is VERY funny. Hilarious, in fact. I hope to read more from your comedic pen.
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