From: kb (sheabrown@gmail.com)
Date: 03/11/2006 |
I agree with Marcella, with a minor expansion. You have a fantastic gift for capturing the speech, mannerisms, and spirit of both Ray and Fraser. Gifted writers such as yourself make fanfic a treat to explore, and I hope to see more of your contributions soon.
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From: Marcella Polman (marcellapolman@hotmail.com)
Date: 10/07/2005 |
Greatness. I love frustrated Ray speak. You have an excellent grasp of it.
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From: Ximeria (ximeria@popullus.net)
Date: 10/07/2005 |
I do enjoy a good tying up of loose ends and with an ending like Odds, it was just begging to be done.
It's been done before, but mostly just a tagged-on ending. What I love here is that we get to see Ray's worries during the case *and* we get bad-ass Ben *g*, that's always a plus.
::thumbs up::
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