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Looking With Intent
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From: Edana ni Emer
Date: 01/11/2006
Whooooo, very hot. I liked this a lot; you have Ray's voice down perfectly, and I love the little details you threw in.
Still can't tell whether that last line is lacvious or ominous, though. ;-)
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