From: spuffyduds
Date: 08/11/2007 |
Wow! This is insanely hot, with a perfect Ray voice, and flashes of hilarity like "He never realized before what a slut his instinct was" that just make it all the hotter.
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From: Marcella Polman (marcellapolman@hotmail.com)
Date: 09/08/2006 |
Great voice, very hot fic, very much awww. Yay you!
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From: Totalfan411
Date: 07/23/2006 |
WOW Geekwriter,That was really REALLY REALLY HOT. There were two lines that really caught my attention
1) He's had stuff up his ass before, fingers and vibrators and once (okay more than once)one of those candles his mum gave him to liven up his place.
This reveal just had me squirming I'd love to see a fic where you tell the first time he tried that.
2) Fraser sighs happily, and as Ray falls asleep he feels Fraser's tongue warm against his skin.
I thought this line was just so sweet and comforting I great foil to how hot and passionate the rest of the fic was. Great job and keep writing PLEASE. :)
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From: carolyn
Date: 07/19/2006 |
Hot. Smutty. It doesn't get much better. Loved it.
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