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Comments on Moosehead

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From: modueser
Date: 12/15/2007
As much as I enjoyed the story line, the errors in punctuation, spelling and typing were so distracting I couldn't finish reading your work. You might try to find a beta to proofread this to clean up the errors and then re-post it.

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