Like the time-skips, though I wasn't 100% sure whether they were in the airport before the book tour or the seminar.
From: Mae Date: 07/30/2009
This story is absolutely gorgeous. The understanding of the characters, knowledge of the series, and depth of thought are amazing, and you obviously put a lot of heart into this. At first it seemed very random, then I saw how you were spinning things down, getting them into tighter focus, until it all came poignantly together at the close.
I'm going to have to look at more of your writing. Rarely does fanfiction get me really thinking and feeling like this did. All the better that it was about two of my favorite fictional boys...
Thank you.
From: Vicki
Date: 12/08/2008
Very good loved the emotions that ran throughout the whole story. I could feel it as i read. Nice work. Keep it up. Would love to see how Ray K gets on in the job.