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Comments on Crossing the Line

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From: Vicki
Date: 06/08/2008
Very nice. I love when Ray said it felt like someone stole his teddy bear. And Deif giving him the Fraser look you know my own dog dose that looks at me like i'm nuts Ha ha. great work

From: Pixie (pixiesmith04@yahoo.com.au)
Date: 05/31/2006
Ray's funny in this. I laughed real hard when I read //I still feel like somebody stole my fucking teddy bear.// Fraser's normally so polite and puts up with everything Ray dishes out that it was funny when he got sick of the baseball tape. Inuit stories for 3 hours nonstop. LOL. I get you there. I liked seeing Ray act like a three-year-old. It was cute. Also funny how he tried to pretend the kiss was an accident but Fraser knew anyway. *grins*. And the sex was way, way hot! Beautiful work!

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