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From: tortiecat
Date: 01/03/2012
I don't like your Fraser very much. He's far too obsessed with Kowalski - so much that he is extremely rude to poor RayV, who really did nothing to him or to RayK to become the object of this rudeness. I'm glad RayV is supportive of Fraser at the end, but Fraser should have given him a heartfelt apology!

I really wish F/K writers would at least try to make RayV, and his friendship with Fraser, important to Fraser. Having Kowalski as a romantic partner isn't enough; Fraser needs RayV's wonderful friendship too, particularly since RayK doesn't always seem to be a good friend to him.

From: Vicki
Date: 07/20/2008
Great story poor Ray K at least Fraser was there for him. I'd love to see more of this and how there relationship go's they are so cute together.
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