From: Marcella Polman (marcellapolman@hotmail.com)
Date: 04/30/2005 |
Great story. Needed feedback, I thought. So here it is: great story. Erotic, in character, great. Humor though? I think not. Angst, yes. Porn, certainly. Didn't make me laugh at all. But I'm not complaining, because, as I said, this is a great story.
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