I would like to thank the three people who were so kind and wonderful
to help proof my story (and help me find a title for it, up until the
last few minutes of proofing it was just titled "That OTHER Car Story"
Disclaimer: These characters do NOT belong to me, they belong to Alliance
and Due South, etc. I am not hurting them, they enjoy this. :) I promise
to play nice and put them back when I am done. Thank you and please
do not sue me :)
WARNING: Rated R, m/m pretty graphic I guess, and Evil Benny.
:)
It was close to 2 a.m. when Benton Fraser and Ray Vecchio found themselves
driving back to the city of Chicago after a long and grueling stakeout.
The two men had been hiding out in a very cramped apartment with two
other policemen for over a week. Tonight the case was finally brought
to an end and the suspects were apprehended, much to the relief of these
two very tired law officers. Ray glanced sideways at his partner in
the passenger seat; the one thing that he had really disliked about this
case was the fact that he and Fraser never had one moment alone together
the entire nine days.
Fraser and Ray were more than just business partners, they were pleasure
partners as well. It wasn't only the *feel* of Fraser that Ray missed,
it was also the quiet moments like this one where they could just be
alone together and enjoy each others presence.
So now they were alone, peaceful and quiet, their thoughts to themselves.
No loud cops, no shifts to take over, no suspects to watch. Just the
two of them, close together, alone in the car. And Ray was finding this
comforting quietness suddenly very arousing. *Why?* he thought. Ray
cleared his throat and tried to concentrate on the dark country road
in front of them. But he was getting antsy, part of his body concentrating
on missing the *feel* of Fraser and not just his company. He wasn't
sure if he should mention this situation to his friend, who looked like
he had fallen asleep anyhow. After all, they were both exhausted. *I
should let him sleep,* Ray thought. *He deserves it, he worked the hardest
out of the four of us.*
Ray wanted to say *something* to Fraser though; they had hardly talked
the entire stakeout, just "cop talk" when they were on the job. Nothing
deep or soul searching, and Ray missed that too. He shifted in his seat
aware that he was beginning to show his arousal. If he just started
an intelligent conversation with Fraser perhaps it would help calm him
down.
"Benny," Ray started to say, of course he had no idea what to say next.
*Damn, think of something intelligent to say you fool!* Ray scolded
himself silently, until he thought of something to say about the case
they were just on. And he was about to add that out loud when he felt
a strong, firm hand slide up his thigh and then slip between his legs.
Ray glanced down at the hand which was sending electricity through his
tired body, and then at the Mountie's innocent face. "Benny?" The name
was no more than a hoarse whisper.
Fraser licked his lips, a mixture of mischief and desire in his deep
blue eyes, and said quietly, "I'm feeling it too, Ray."
*That Mountie always has an uncanny way of knowing exactly what I need,*
Ray thought then moaned out loud as Fraser unzipped his pants, releasing
the pressure between his legs. *And he is always so good with his hands...*
Ray drew in a sharp breath when he felt Fraser's hand slip inside his
pants, causing him to swerve the car slightly.
"Just concentrate on the road, Ray. Relax."
There was an unfamiliar edge in Fraser's voice so Ray glanced over at
his friend. Much to the cop's surprise, the Mountie was staring out
the passenger window, his eyes glazed over. Ray also thought he saw
a smirk on Fraser's face, almost as if he were enjoying testing Ray's
ability to drive while being distracted.
Ray shifted in his seat again, trying to feel the full impact of Fraser's
hand and yet still be able to drive the car. It was a difficult thing
to do because Fraser's gentle stokes and tugs on Ray's fully aroused
cock were not making this easy. Ray gasped at a particularly sensual
touch from the Mountie and realized that Fraser was going to draw this
out as much as he could.
The pleasure he felt from Fraser's hand and the fact that he couldn't
do much about it made it difficult to think about driving on this dark,
winding road. Taking a deep breath Ray managed to croak out, "Pulling
over."
Fraser's hand left Ray's cock in a flash. "NO! PLEASE!" Ray cried out
a little too loudly and nearly slammed on the brakes. "Please, your
hand... Benny..."
"You can't pull over, Ray. For one, we have another hour and a half
drive until we get back to Chicago and it's already really late. And
secondly, Leftenant Welsh and a bunch of other cops are in cars following
us. If we
pull over they will too. Then they will most probably come check on
us to see what's wrong. How do you plan on explaining what they will
see? What if you were right at the edge? What then, Ray? You won't
let me stop and I don't think that you really want to put on a performance
for..."
"Okay! Okay! I get the picture, Fraser! But please, I need your hand
back there, it felt so good, Benny. Please."
"Where, Ray?"
The wild look in Fraser's eyes nearly drove Ray insane. "Touch me, Benny."
"Where do you want me to touch you, Ray?" Fraser leaned over and whispered
in the cop's ear. Ray took a deep breath, trying to keep control of
the car, when all he really wanted to do was push Fraser over on to his
back and.... "*Where*, Ray?"
"My cock, Benny. I want your hand back on my cock."
"Oh. Okay." Fraser slipped his hand back through the opened zipper
and rested his hand on Ray's cock. A few seconds later Ray hissed,
"Benny!"
"Yes, Ray?" Fraser's innocent face was only contradicted by the devilish
look in his eyes.
"*Do* something with your hand, Fraser," Ray snarled through clenched
teeth. He tried moving his hips slightly to help Fraser along but found
that if he did, the car would swerve or slow down.
"Like what, Ray?"
"Oh, please don't do this to me. Not now! *Move* your hand, Fraser!
Fuck me with your hand. *Please!* *Now!*"
"Like this?" Fraser's hand closed around the aching flesh and began
to pump up and down with slow strokes.
"Ohhh...Yes, just like... Ohhhhh God!"
But Fraser stopped again. Ray's eyes looked like they would pop out
of his head. "But *why*, Ray?"
"What?!!?"
Fraser had to suppress a giggle, Ray was breathing hard now and looked
so adorable when he was all worked up like this. And making Ray suffer
was beginning to turn the Mountie on. *Not now, * Fraser told himself.
*This is for Ray now*. "Why should I do this, Ray? Why do you want
me to?"
Ray swore, he was *this* close to throwing his friend out of the car
and satisfying himself. He just knew that Fraser was getting some sort
of perverse pleasure out of torturing him like this. "Because I need
it, Fraser."
"You do?"
"Yes!" Ray almost screamed. His body ached to feel Fraser's hand pumping
him again.
"Really?"
"Listen, Mountie Man! I *need* it real bad! And if you don't wise
up..."
"Okay! Okay!" Fraser raised his hands in defense. "Whatever you say,
Ray." He then took hold of Ray's flesh again and began to work his magic.
Only things were getting too intense for Ray and he could feel his body
begging for one thing.
"Oh, God, oh God! Benny...suck me...Benny!!"
Fraser's eyes lit up; this was better than he had expected it to be.
He loved it when Ray would cry out like that. Those words would always
cause a stirring in his own groin and he didn't have to be told twice.
The Mountie undid his seat belt and leaned over so that his mouth was
inches away from his hand on Ray's cock. Ray could feel Fraser's warm
breath on his throbbing desire and cried out, taking on hand off the
steering wheel to push the Mountie's head to his cock. "Suck me *now*,
Benny!"
And so he did. Swirling tongue, scraping teeth and a warm, wet mouth
sucking and swallowing all of Ray. The cop was enjoying this feeling
very much and he felt his climax fast approaching, much to his relief.
Now all he had to do was make sure he didn't step on the gas too hard.
Only Fraser had something else planned. The Mountie sat up just as Ray
was on the brink of ecstasy.
"Fraser, noooooo, " Ray howled, almost driving the car off the road.
"I can't do this, Ray." Fraser was panting almost as much as his lover.
"Fuck you, Fraser. *Finish* it! You can't leave me like this. FINISH
IT!" Ray began to mumble almost in a meditative state, "So close, so
close," over and over as Fraser began to speak.
"I can't, Ray. I need you to touch me." His words were choppy and
his voice was hoarse. Out of the corner of his eye Ray saw Fraser spread
his legs apart and unzip his jeans, where his arousal was almost breaking
the seams.
"Fraser...after...I'll do.....just...finish... *please!!*" Ray's thoughts
were jumbled, he couldn't focus on anything. Not even the road. He
just needed that orgasm.
"No, Ray. I need you to do this for me." Fraser's voice was stern,
almost vicious. "Or I'm not going to touch *you*, Ray. Come on, give
me your hand."
With a sigh, Ray knew that there was no arguing with his Canadian friend.
When Fraser got like this it was best just to go along with him, no matter
how much he was suffering. He looked down at Fraser's hands as they
released his large, hard cock from white boxers. "Fraser, please?"
"First me, Ray," Fraser gasped out. He was absently stoking his own
cock with one hand while the other traced a path down the detectives
arm leading it to rest on his aching manhood. "Do it, Ray."
Ray reluctantly began to pump Fraser's cock, running his hand firmly
from base to tip, up and down the shaft. Fraser brought one leg up and
pressed his foot against the dash board lifting is hips off the seat.
Blindly the Mountie reached out and grabbed the lever under his seat
causing it to lean back, moaning and gasping with each thrust against
Ray's tightly gripping hand.
Ray was trying to keep the car steady, and trying not to speed up or
slow down too much, but each sound that emanated from the Mountie's mouth
drove him mad with desire. He wanted to take his other hand off the
wheel and stop the desperation he was feeling. And he wanted so badly
to watch his friend thrust into his hand. But he couldn't do *any* of
those things.
"Oh God, Ray....OH God, Raaaay."
"Benny, I'm gonna end up crashing the car, I need you to...."
"Faster, Ray, I'm almost there, " Fraser gasped for breath between each
word. Fraser's hand slipped over Ray's and he pushed Ray's hand harder
against his cock using his other hand to massage his balls. Finally
after slurred moaning and groaning Fraser came and cried out Ray's name.
"Fraser, " Ray gasped as he felt his friend start to soften. "Now...."
With in a seconds the Mountie was attacking Ray's moist cock with his
mouth. He climaxed almost immediately. It was all Ray could do to not
slam on the breaks as he came; he did speed up the car for a moment though
but caught himself just in time.
Fraser sat up and let out a deep breath, a contented smile on his face.
"I hate you for this, Benny." Ray's voice was thick and breathless but
he was smiling from ear to ear so Fraser knew he didn't mean it.
"And I'll bet that you can't wait until we get back to my apartment,
right, Ray?"
Ray just smiled in response and felt his cock stir again. "Neither can
I, Ray," Fraser whispered as his hand found its way back between Ray's
legs.
"Ohhh, Benny.." Ray moaned. One thing for sure, he would never hate
long car rides again.
FINIS
TAWI 0};~) smile
WAITING ON THE TIDE - aka - ARE WE THERE YET?????
by: TAWI - the Innocently Evil Twin
Copyright 1996
The Innocently Evil Twin
I am not insane, I am artisic!!
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